Today's homework
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1. Last weekend, I went to VIVALDI PARK for taking a snow board with my friends. however I couldn’t riding a snow board because we were drunken ever 5 am.. we got up lunchtime and came back to the home.
2. I'd love to watch the movies on the screen. I saw the movie les-miserables recently. it was too impressive for me to cry . what a valuable movie is!
3. Next month, I am going to visit my cousin in Wonju, Gangwondo with my family at Lunar New Year's Day. there are grand-father, grand-mother, all of my mother’s side cousins.
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Hi there, Phil!
Thank you for your composition! You wrote good sentences here! Keep it up! Take care and have a wonderful time!
T. JanE ^^1. Last weekend, I went to VIVALDI PARK for taking a snow board with my friends. however I couldn’t riding a snow board because we were drunken ever 5 am.. we got up lunchtime and came back to the home.>> Last weekend, I went to Vivaldi Park to do snowboarding with my friends. However, I couldn\'t ride on the snowboard because we drank until 5 am. We got up at lunch time and went back home.2. I\'d love to watch the movies on the screen. I saw the movie les-miserables recently. it was too impressive for me to cry . what a valuable movie is!>> I\'d love to watch movies on screem. I saw Les Miserables and it was too impressive that I cried. What an amazing movie it is!3. Next month, I am going to visit my cousin in Wonju, Gangwondo with my family at Lunar New Year\'s Day. there are grand-father, grand-mother, all of my mother’s side cousins.
>> Next month, I am going to visit my cousin in Wonju, Gangwondo with my family on Lunar New Year\'s Day. My grandfather, grandmother, and all my maternal cousins will be there.
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