today's homework

2013-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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I think women are more careful than men, and I think it gives women an edge. When I studied at highschool, all teachers gave us to tons of homework. Some boys missed the deadline, or submitted uncompleted homework. In addition, I think carefulness can be women's edge when they work in the company because there are many tasks to do at the same time.

강사 첨삭

Hi Stella! Thanks for doing your homework!^^ I think women are careful but men are lazy. (I mean most men, haha.) That could be our edge over them . :) Call you again tomorrow!^^ Night! ~Teacher Alice I think women are more careful than men, and I think it gives women an edge. >> Correct! When I studied at highschool, all teachers gave us to tons of homework. >> When I studied in highschool, all teachers gave us tons of homework. *in high school. If you will mention a specific high school then you can use \'at\'. Example: at Seoul National High School. Some boys missed the deadline, or submitted uncompleted homework. >> Correct! In addition, I think carefulness can be women\'s edge when they work in the company because there are many tasks to do at the same time. >> In addition, I think carefulness can be women\'s edge when they work in the company because they have many tasks to do at the same time.

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