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I have lived in Ansan for 27years so I know well transportation system of Ansan. When you want to go Ansan , you can take the subway bound for Oido line no.4.(blue line). if you live in Seoul anywhere you have to expect that the time required is about 1hour 10minutes. bus system will be taken by you too. but there are few bus service route from Seoul than another city. when I went to university 6 years ago I must take a bus then transfer to subway line no.4. so if I had 9 am lecture I had to wake up 6.20am and leave the house 7am .(2hours ago). I had been tired until graduated university. what a amazing it is.. however in the city , transport system is equipped very well .^^ welcome to Ansan!

Hi there, Phil! Thank you for your composition today! You\'re lucky to have a very good transportation system in your area. I bet you live in a convenient neighborhood. Anyway, this composition is well-written. Keep it up! Take care and have a good time! T. JanE ^^ I have lived in Ansan for 27years so I know well transportation system of Ansan. >> I have lived in Ansan for 27 years, so I know the transportation system very well. When you want to go Ansan , you can take the subway bound for Oido line no.4.(blue line). >> When you want to go to Ansan, you can take the subway bound for Oido, line no. 4 or the blue line. if you live in Seoul anywhere you have to expect that the time required is about 1hour 10minutes. >> If you live anywhere in Seoul, you have to expect that the time required is about 1 hour and 10 minutes. bus system will be taken by you too. >> The bus system will be taken by you, too. but there are few bus service route from Seoul than another city. >> However, there are few bus service routes from Seoul than other cities. when I went to university 6 years ago I must take a bus then transfer to subway line no.4. >> When i went to the university 6 years ago, I must take the bus then transfer to subway line no. 4. so if I had 9 am lecture I had to wake up 6.20am and leave the house 7am .(2hours ago). >> So if I had a lecture at 9 am, I had to wake up at 6:20 am and leave the house at 7 am. I had been tired until graduated university. >> I was tired until I graduated from the university. what a amazing it is.. >> What an amazing experience it was! however in the city , transport system is equipped very well .^^ >> However, in the city, the transport system is equipped very well. Welcome to Ansan! >> Correct