today's homework

2013-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Takeshi swimmed one hundred laps in the pool yesterday. Wrong word: swimmed Correct sentence: Takeshi swam one hundred laps in the pool yesterday. 2. I had a enjoyable time at the party last night. Wrong word: a Correct sentence: i had an enjoyable time at the party last night. 3. Each day after school, Jerome run five miles. Wrong word: run Correct sentence: Each day after school, Jerome runs five miles. 4. Do you know the student who books were stolen? Wrong word: were stolen Correct sentence: Do you know the student who steal the books?? 5. Petra intends to starting her own software business in a few years. Wrong word: her own Correct sentence: on her own

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Phil! Thank you for your composition today! I hope that you\'re having a good time. Take care and stay positive! T. JanE ^^1. Takeshi swimmed one hundred laps in the pool yesterday.Wrong word: swimmedCorrect sentence: Takeshi swam one hundred laps in the pool yesterday.>> Correct 2. I had a enjoyable time at the party last night.Wrong word: aCorrect sentence: I had an enjoyable time at the party last night.>> Correct 3. Each day after school, Jerome run five miles.Wrong word: runCorrect sentence: Each day after school, Jerome runs five miles.>> Correct 4. Do you know the student who books were stolen?Wrong word: were stolenCorrect sentence: Do you know the student who steal the books??>> Wrong word: who Correct sentence: Do you know the student whose books were stolen?5. Petra intends to starting her own software business in a few years.Wrong word: her ownCorrect sentence: on her own >> Wrong word: starting Correct sentence: Petra intends to start her own software business in a few years.

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