Today's homework

2013-08-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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What is the best movie you have ever seen? Why is it the best so far? I like SF movies and Zombi movies like World War Z, but the best movie I have seen is Ben Hur. When I was a high school student, I saw this movie with my friend. At that time, I don't know what this movie is My friend had two free tickets and he wanted to watch this movie with me. But I would not like to watch this movie and I prefer SF movie After I watched Ben hur, I was impressed with this movie. After that I watched this movie two more times when I was a Unversify student I am sorry but I can't finish my homework becuase I have to attend the meeting From today, I will do my homework at night after close of my business Please understand, I can't finish my homework.

강사 첨삭

Hi!

Thank you for doing your homework.

I understand that sometimes, when we are too busy, we have to prioritize things. :)

Just keep up the good work. Remember that diligent students learn faster than those who take their subjects for granted.^^

Take care and see you in class!

~Teacher Kay~

I like SF movies and Zombi movies like World War Z, but the best movie I have seen is Ben Hur.

>>Correct! [sombie]
When I was a high school student, I saw this movie with my friend.

>>Correct!
At that time, I don\'t know what this movie is

>>At that time, I didn\'t know what the movie was all about.
My friend had two free tickets and he wanted to watch this movie with me.
>>Correct!

But I would not like to watch this movie and I prefer SF movie

>>However, I did not want to watch this movie because I prefer SF ones.
After I watched Ben hur, I was impressed with this movie.

>>Correct!

After that I watched this movie two more times when I was a Unversify student
>>Correct! [university]
I am sorry but I can\'t finish my homework becuase I have to attend the meeting
>>I am sorry but I cannot finish  my homework because I have to attend a meeting.

From today, I will do my homework at night after close of my business.

>>From today, I will do my homework at night after I close my business.
Please understand, I can\'t finish my homework.

>>Correct!^^ OR  Please understand why I can\'t finish my homework.

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