today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What other amazing creatures do you know? Tell me about them.
Well, I don't know any "amazing" creatures other than Unicorn of the Sea. But I do know that there are many creatures which are danger in extinction, such as polar bears, giant pandas, etc. If these animals disappear from the earth, they will be "amazing" creatures, which we cannot even see them anywhere forever. It is important to find new amazing creatures that we have never found before. But in my opinion, it is more important to protect the animals around us not to extinct.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Lity!
A pleasant morning once more!
Thank you very much for doing this homework! :)
You\'re absolutely right! We have to protect what we have before we try to find other species! :)
I hope most people would also realize the same thing to always maintain the balance here on Earth.
Anyway, please check the corrections I made for you!
Have a great day and see you!
T.Kristel
What other amazing creatures do you know? Tell me about them.Well, I don\'t know any \"amazing\" creatures other than Unicorn of the Sea.
>> Well, I don\'t know any \"amazing\" creatures other than the Unicorn of the Sea.
But I do know that there are many creatures which are danger in extinction, such as polar bears, giant pandas, etc.
>> But I do know that there are many creatures which are in danger of extinction, such as polar bears, giant pandas, etc.
If these animals disappear from the earth, they will be \"amazing\" creatures, which we cannot even see them anywhere forever.
>> If these animals disappear from the earth, they will be the \"amazing\" creatures, which we cannot see anymore, forever.
It is important to find new amazing creatures that we have never found before.
>> CORRECT!!
But in my opinion, it is more important to protect the animals around us not to extinct.
>>CORRECT!!
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