today's homework

2014-01-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I like all finds of restaurant. Because,all of the restaurant's foods are delicious. But I sometimes go to the restaurant. because I'm on a diet. And the food is so greasy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom!

Thank you so much for doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot!

I know that you also like grammar homework so I will give you next week.

I gave you essay homework this week in order for you to improve your writing skill too.^^

You are right! The food in restaurants are delicious. I hope that you will have a nice weekend!

See you next week!
Teacher Nina


I like all finds of restaurant.

>> Correct! (Spelling check: kinds ^^ )
Because,all of the restaurant\'s foods are delicious.

>> It is because all of the food in restaurants are delicious.
But I sometimes go to the restaurant.

>> But I don\'t usually go to a restaurant.

>> OR: I only sometimes go to a restaurant.
because I\'m on a diet.

>> Correct!

>> OR: It is because I\'m on a diet.
And the food is so greasy.

>> And the food is too greasy.

>> OR: Some of the foods are too greasy.

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