today's homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
According some books, there are no ways to save the solar system.
In future,the sun will be a huge gases ball.
And it will gobble up solar system.
But there are ways to bsave the earth.
We must recycle and don't make a dirty air.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Tom!
You are right! Recycling is really important nowadays.
I am proud of you! You used a new word today! Great!
What are the other ways to save the Earth? Can you please tell it in class.
I admire you for doing a good job with your homework.
Please find time to check this during your free time.
I recommend you to check on your verb tenses and word order. You can do it! See you in class!Teacher Nina
According some books, there are no ways to save the solar system.
>> According to some books, there are no ways to save the solar system. In future,the sun will be a huge gases ball.
>> In the future, the sun will be a huge gas of ball.And it will gobble up solar system.
>> It will gobble up the solar system. But there are ways to bsave the earth.
>> But there are ways to save the Earth.
>> OR: But there are still ways to save the Earth. We must recycle and don\'t make a dirty air.
>> We must recycle and keep the air clean.
>> OR: We must recycle and not pollute the air.
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