today's homework

2014-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think l have a wonderful life if I am famous. I always imagine that I become a famous person. Imagine this,there is a morning newspaper.and I appear in the newspaper. how wonderful life! how about you? If you are famous,what will you do?

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Hi Tom! I am so happy that I was able to talk to you today. I know that you are really preparing for the contests. That\'s why I am so grateful that you did your homework. Keep it up! I know you can do it! Please go over the corrections below and your student page. Treat yourself this long holiday. ^^ Enjoy your time with your family and friends.Talk to you next week. Take Care!Teacher Nina   I think l have a wonderful life if I am famous. >> I think I will have a a wonderful if I am famous. I always imagine that I become a famous person. >> I always imagine that I am famous person. >> OR: I always dream of becoming a famous person.Imagine this,there is a morning newspaper. and I appear in the newspaper. >> Did you mean: Imagine this, there is a newspaper and my picture is on it. >> OR: Imagine, my picture appeared in the newspaper.how wonderful life! >> Did you mean: How wonderful my life would be? how about you? >> Correct If you are famous,what will you do? >> Correct

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