today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I think l have a wonderful life if I am famous.
I always imagine that I become a famous person.
Imagine this,there is a morning newspaper.and I appear in the newspaper.
how wonderful life!
how about you?
If you are famous,what will you do?
강사 첨삭
Hi Tom!
I am so happy that I was able to talk to you today.
I know that you are really preparing for the contests.
That\'s why I am so grateful that you did your homework.
Keep it up! I know you can do it!
Please go over the corrections below and your student page.
Treat yourself this long holiday. ^^
Enjoy your time with your family and friends.Talk to you next week.
Take Care!Teacher Nina
I think l have a wonderful life if I am famous.
>> I think I will have a a wonderful if I am famous.
I always imagine that I become a famous person.
>> I always imagine that I am famous person.
>> OR: I always dream of becoming a famous person.Imagine this,there is a morning newspaper. and I appear in the newspaper.
>> Did you mean: Imagine this, there is a newspaper and my picture is on it.
>> OR: Imagine, my picture appeared in the newspaper.how wonderful life!
>> Did you mean: How wonderful my life would be? how about you?
>> Correct
If you are famous,what will you do?
>> Correct
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