today's homework

2014-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Yes.I ate a lot of chocolates when I was young. Beacause,I thought chocolates don't make me fat when I was young. But now,I know about good things and bad things of chocolate. So,I sometimes eat chocolates. But I still want to eat chocolates.

강사 첨삭

Tom! A great Tuesday! I do love eating chocolates too. My favorite brands are Hershey\'s and Ferrero Rocher like you. We should refrain to eat a lot of chocolates to avoid a disease, Diabetes Mellitus. Talk to you tomorrow.Teacher Nina   Yes.I ate a lot of chocolates when I was young. >> CorrectBeacause,I thought chocolates don\'t make me fat when I was young. >> Because I thought chocolates won\'t make me fat when I was a child. ( spelling check: But now,I know about good things and bad things of chocolate. >> But now, I know about the good things and bad things of chocolate. So,I sometimes eat chocolates. >> CorrectBut I still want to eat chocolates. >> Correct

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