today's homework

2014-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes.I think I have an outgoing personality. Because,I have a lot of friends. I won't be alone forever because I have an outgoing personality. How about you? Do you think that you have an outgoing npersonality?

강사 첨삭

Hello there TOM! Wow! Long time no see! Thank you for always doing your homework. I think I am an outgoing person because like you, I have a lot of friends. We often go out and relax. Yes, you are! That\'s why I always look forward talking to you. I am excited to hear your stories in class. See you! Teacher Nina   Yes.I think I have an outgoing personality. >> Correct >> OR: Yes, I am an outgoing person. Because,I have a lot of friends. >> CorrectI won\'t be alone forever because I have an outgoing personality. >> CorrectHow about you? >> CorrectDo you think that you have an outgoing npersonality? >> Do you think you have an outgoing personality? >> OR: Do you think you are an outgoing person?

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