today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Tom!
Wow! Really? You wrote something about it?
Please let me know some of the things that you wrote in class.
I am really interested to hear about it.
Be careful with the words you use, always check if it is used as a verb, noun, adjective or adverb,
The meaning of the sentence becomes different. Talk to you later. Happy Monday!
Teacher Nina
I will not let the robot to do my chores.
>> I will not let the robot do my chores.
Because I know what happen when I don\'t do anything.
>> Because I know what will happen if I won\'t do anything.
My hands and feet will atrophy.
>> My hands and feet will degenerate.
>> OR: My hands and feet will have some problems. ( Atrophy is used as a noun)
And I also have written the book about the robot doing the housework.
>> And also I have written a book about a robot doing the housework.
>> OR: I wrote something about a robot doing household chores.
It is not good for our body and our mind.
>> Correct
>> OR: It is not good for our body and mind.
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