today's homework

2014-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I will not let the robot to do my chores. Because I know what happen when I don't do anything. My hands and feet will atrophy. And I also have written the book about the robot doing the housework. It is not good for our body and our mind.

강사 첨삭

Hi Tom!

Wow! Really? You wrote something about it?

Please let me know some of the things that you wrote in class.

I am really interested to hear about it.

Be careful with the words you use, always check if it is used as a verb, noun, adjective or adverb,

The meaning of the sentence becomes different. Talk to you later. Happy Monday!

Teacher Nina


I will not let the robot to do my chores.

>> I will not let the robot do my chores.
Because I know what happen when I don\'t do anything.

>> Because I know what will happen if I won\'t do anything.
My hands and feet will atrophy.

>> My hands and feet will degenerate.

>> OR: My hands and feet will  have some problems. ( Atrophy is used as a noun)
And I also have written the book about the robot doing the housework.

>> And also I have written a book about a robot doing the housework.
>> OR: I wrote something about a robot doing
 household chores.
It is not good for our body and our mind.

>> Correct

>> OR: It is not good for our body and mind.

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