today's homework

2014-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Mother gave her baby a red apple. The baby tried to eat the apple. His mouth was too small. And he didn't have any teeth. The brother took his apple. Here is rainy season called 'zang ma'. It is rainy all day. And the wind blows very strongly. It is very hot and wet. I don't like 'zang ma'.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tom!

Thank you for doing your homework.

How was your day in school?

I think I don\'t like \"zang ma\" too. Hihihi!

What do you usually feel when it rains?

Tell me about it in class.

Please go over your corrections.

Always remember the usage of articles. I know you can do it.

Teacher Nina


Mother gave her baby a red apple.

>> The mother gave her baby a red apple. ( Don\'t forget our article.^^ )
The baby tried to eat the apple.

>> Correct!
His mouth was too small.

>> Correct! 
And he didn\'t have any teeth.

>> Correct! 
The brother took his apple.

>> His brother took his apple.


Here is rainy season called \'zang ma\'.

>> We are experiencing rainy season called \"zang ma\".
It is rainy all day.

>> It is raining all day.
And the wind blows very strongly.

>> And the wind blows very strong.

>> OR: The wind is very strong.
It is very hot and wet.

>> Correct! 

>> OR: The weather is hot but the surroundings is wet.
I don\'t like \'zang ma\'.

>> Correct!

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