today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom!
Thank you for doing your homework.
How was your day in school?
I think I don\'t like \"zang ma\" too. Hihihi!
What do you usually feel when it rains?
Tell me about it in class.
Please go over your corrections.
Always remember the usage of articles. I know you can do it.
Teacher Nina
Mother gave her baby a red apple.
>> The mother gave her baby a red apple. ( Don\'t forget our article.^^ )
The baby tried to eat the apple.
>> Correct!
His mouth was too small.
>> Correct!
And he didn\'t have any teeth.
>> Correct!
The brother took his apple.
>> His brother took his apple.
Here is rainy season called \'zang ma\'.
>> We are experiencing rainy season called \"zang ma\".
It is rainy all day.
>> It is raining all day.
And the wind blows very strongly.
>> And the wind blows very strong.
>> OR: The wind is very strong.
It is very hot and wet.
>> Correct!
>> OR: The weather is hot but the surroundings is wet.
I don\'t like \'zang ma\'.
>> Correct!
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