today's homework

2014-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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there are two my best memories. One is the time that I recieved science president award. That award is very special because the science president give it only 11 people. And other one is to pass the invention contest. And I'm the first place winner in that contest.

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Hi there Tom! Great! Those memories are really memorable. I am really proud of you. I know how hard you prepared for it. You really deserve it than anybody else. Keep up the good work. Talk to you tomorrow. Teacher Nina   there are two my best memories. >> I have two best memories in my life. >> OR: There are two best memories in my life. One is the time that I recieved science president award. >> First is the time that I received an award from a Science president. That award is very special because the science president give it only 11 people. >> That award was very special because the Science president gave it only to eleven people. And other one is to pass the invention contest. >> And the other one was when I pased the invention contest. And I\'m the first place winner in that contest. >> And I was the first in that contest. >> OR: I got the first award in that contest.

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