today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a English contest.
Many people were having an English contest.
It crowded very much.
And I recieved the award.
I'm so happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi Tom!
You always make me proud of you.
It is really nice that you share your own ideas in writing.
Keep it up! Try to make your essays longer.
I hope that you will win another contest that you are going to join.
Don\'t forget the usage of articles.
Talk to you tomorrow.Teacher Nina
I had a English contest.
>> I had an English contest. Many people were having an English contest.
>> Correct
>> OR: Many people participates in an English contest these days.It crowded very much.
>> It was really crowded.And I recieved the award.
>> And I received an award. I\'m so happy.
>> Correct
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