today's homework

2014-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I like light color better. Because,it makes me happy. For an example,I like sky blue because It's light. Anyway, I prefer the light colors.

강사 첨삭

Good day Tom!

You are right! Bright colors/ Light colors make us happy.

It changes our mood. Me, too. I like bright colors especially blue.

What is your favorite color? What comes into your mind when you see dark colors?

You can share it in class. Please be careful of the usage of articles.

I\'ll be giving your grammar homework soon.

Teacher Nina


I like light color better.

>> CORRECT!
Because,it makes me happy.

>> CORRECT! 
 For an example,I like sky blue because It\'s light.

>> For example, I like they sky because the color is bright.

>> OR: For example. I like the color of the sky because it is bright.
Anyway, I prefer the light colors

>> CORRECT!

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