Today's homework!!

I am sure that there is no equal right in Korea. I have lived in Korea for about 22 years. While living here, I always think that Korea is not a good country if people do not have a lot of money. Of course, money is an important factor to live. However, in case of Korea, the severity is worsen than other countries. Although people are guilty,if having money, they will be innocent. Moreover, money is stronger than human rights. If I have a lot of money, I would like to live other countries such as Sweden and Denmark which become known for welfare states.

Happy Wednesday, my dear [이름]!   Thanks for your opinions! Well, money can really move mountains, rights? The situation is your country is just the same in the Philippines. Rich people are most likely to have the advantage.   But I guess that\'s the reality of life. I am used to it because I\'ve seen a lot of cases like these in my country. I even experienced being a victim of inequality. I don\'t know if the issue of equal rights can be solved.   Good job [이름]!   ~Teacher Shanee   I am sure that there is no equal right in Korea. >>> Correct!I have lived in Korea for about 22 years. >>> Correct!While living here, I always think that Korea is not a good country if people do not have a lot of money. >>> Correct!Of course, money is an important factor to live. >>> Correct!However, in case of Korea, the severity is worsen than other countries. >>> However, in case of Korea, the severity has worsen than the other countries.Although people are guilty,if having money, they will be innocent. >>> Although people are guilty, if they have money, they can become innocent. Moreover, money is stronger than human rights. >>> Correct!If I have a lot of money, I would like to live other countries such as Sweden and Denmark which become known for welfare states. >>> If I have a lot of money, I would like to live in other countires such as Sweden and Denmark which are known for being welfare states.