Today's homework!!

2014-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Frankly speaking, I have no dream in my life. To find a specific dream, I decided to take a year off last year. I thought it is easy for me to find it by doing new experiences. But, I still have no goal although much time pass. When I was a middle school student, I wanted to be a kindergarten teacher. Since then, I have not had any dream. Though I like volunteering and helping others, I do not want to do that as a job. Though I like children and playing with them, I am not sure it is my way. Because no one lives my life, I have to be responsible for entire my life. In this respect, I am little nervous about deciding my goal. However, I would like to find it before finishing taking time off. Of course, the process of determining it may make me tired. Despite this obstacle, I will try to do it and never give up.!

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!   Thanks for making your homework!^^) I agree that writing down your goals and ticking them off is advantageous, It is is one way for us to have a clear and measurable goals to work towards. Hopefully, you\'ll be able to realizse your own goals so you\'d be able to start ticking them off.     ~Teacher Shanee   Frankly speaking, I have no dream in my life. >>> Correct!To find a specific dream, I decided to take a year off last year. >>> Correct!I thought it is easy for me to find it by doing new experiences. >>> I thought it was easy for me to find it by creating new experiences.But, I still have no goal although much time pass. >>> But still, I haven\'t realized my goal although much time has passed.When I was a middle school student, I wanted to be a kindergarten teacher. >>> Correct! Since then, I have not had any dream. >>> Since then, I have not had any other dream.Though I like volunteering and helping others, I do not want to do that as a job. >>> Correct!Though I like children and playing with them, I am not sure it is my way. >>> Correct! (way-dream) Because no one lives my life, I have to be responsible for entire my life. >>> Because no one can live my life for me, I have to be responsible for my entire life.In this respect, I am little nervous about deciding my goal. >>> Correct! (a little nervous)However, I would like to find it before finishing taking time off >>> However, I would like to find it before my break. (sson)Of course, the process of determining it may make me tired. >>> Correct!Despite this obstacle, I will try to do it and never give up.! >>> Correct!  

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