Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Frankly speaking, I have no dream in my life.
To find a specific dream, I decided to take a year off last year.
I thought it is easy for me to find it by doing new experiences.
But, I still have no goal although much time pass.
When I was a middle school student, I wanted to be a kindergarten teacher.
Since then, I have not had any dream.
Though I like volunteering and helping others, I do not want to do that as a job.
Though I like children and playing with them, I am not sure it is my way.
Because no one lives my life, I have to be responsible for entire my life.
In this respect, I am little nervous about deciding my goal.
However, I would like to find it before finishing taking time off.
Of course, the process of determining it may make me tired.
Despite this obstacle, I will try to do it and never give up.!
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for making your homework!^^)
I agree that writing down your goals and ticking them off is advantageous,
It is is one way for us to have a clear and measurable goals to work towards.
Hopefully, you\'ll be able to realizse your own goals so you\'d be able to start ticking them off.
~Teacher Shanee
Frankly speaking, I have no dream in my life.
>>> Correct!To find a specific dream, I decided to take a year off last year.
>>> Correct!I thought it is easy for me to find it by doing new experiences.
>>> I thought it was easy for me to find it by creating new experiences.But, I still have no goal although much time pass.
>>> But still, I haven\'t realized my goal although much time has passed.When I was a middle school student, I wanted to be a kindergarten teacher.
>>> Correct! Since then, I have not had any dream.
>>> Since then, I have not had any other dream.Though I like volunteering and helping others, I do not want to do that as a job.
>>> Correct!Though I like children and playing with them, I am not sure it is my way.
>>> Correct! (way-dream)
Because no one lives my life, I have to be responsible for entire my life.
>>> Because no one can live my life for me, I have to be responsible for my entire life.In this respect, I am little nervous about deciding my goal.
>>> Correct! (a little nervous)However, I would like to find it before finishing taking time off
>>> However, I would like to find it before my break. (sson)Of course, the process of determining it may make me tired.
>>> Correct!Despite this obstacle, I will try to do it and never give up.!
>>> Correct!
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