Today's homework!!

I completely agree with this quotation. No one can know many future accidents related to ourselves. So, we have to enjoy our life rather than spending much time working to earn a lot of money and competing others. However, in case of Korean like me, it is not easy to ignore these factors. Korea makes people competing each other and if we are defeated in the competition, we will be behind competitors. In this respect, I would like to live in other countries if I have a chance to live in. In Korea, power and money is the important factors in living our life. I want to concentrating on this time, not the past and future.

 Hi there!   Thank you so much for sending this in!   It is true that no one knows what will happen tomorrow. We wouldn\'t know whether we are going to be given another chance to live our life tomorrow. The things that we didn\'t expect might happen and the things that expected might not. So what\'s important now is to live our life to the fullest and make every single moment count.     ~Teacher Shanee   I completely agree with this quotation. >>> Correct!No one can know many future accidents related to ourselves. >>> No one knows what will happen to us in the future.So, we have to enjoy our life rather than spending much time working to earn a lot of money and competing others. >>> So we have to enjoy our life rather than spending most of our time working to earn a lot of money and competing with others.However, in case of Korean like me, it is not easy to ignore these factors. >>> However, in case of  a Korean like me, it is not easy to ignore these factors.Korea makes people competing each other and if we are defeated in the competition, we will be behind competitors. >>> Korea makes people compete with each other and the ones who are defeated will be left behind by their competitors. In this respect, I would like to live in other countries if I have a chance to live in. >>> In this respect, I would like to live in other countries if I have a chance.In Korea, power and money is the important factors in living our life. >>> In Korea, money and power are the important factors that must be considered in order to have a good life.I want to concentrating on this time, not the past and future. >>> I want to concentrate on the present, not on the past nor the future.