Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I only have a day to live,I will not able to do anything.
Although I have lived for 23 years, I am still young and there still remain many days which I can live.
So, I think I will regret this point.
Moreover, I will regret the past days I spent.
To prevent from regretting, I ought not to spend my time away.
Until now, I have lived entire my life without any goals.
So, I will try to live a fruitful life every moment.
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, my dear!
Thinking that this may be our last day on Earth is how we must live our life.
This is a very effective way to motivate ourselves to live every single moment of our lives to the fullest.
It can change the quality of life we live each day. We must focus on what matters most for us. We must focus on achieving the goals we\'ve set for ourselves. Live today as if there is no tomorrow!
It\'s time to set your goals [이름]!
~Teacher Shanee
If I only have a day to live,I will not able to do anything.
>>> If I only have a day to live, I will not be able to do anything.Although I have lived for 23 years, I am still young and there still remain many days which I can live.
>>> Although I\'ve been living for 23 years, I am still young and there are still many days remaining for me to spend.So, I think I will regret this point.
>>> Correct!Moreover, I will regret the past days I spent.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: Maybe I will regret how I spent my previous days.To prevent from regretting, I ought not to spend my time away.
>>> Correct!Until now, I have lived entire my life without any goals.
>>> Until now, I am living my life without any goals.So, I will try to live a fruitful life every moment.
>>> So I will try to live a fruitful life from now on.
>>> OR: So I will try to live every single moment of life wisely.
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