Today's homework!!

The most serious problem in the world is global warming. By doing something to influence it in our daily lives, glacier is decreasing. Whenever summer comes, we always use air conditioners. Although there is a substitute such as electric fan, we excessively use them. Because of these trivial choices, maybe any islands will disappear someday. Moreover, most of the people who do not do it also harm damage. The earth we live in is not ours and we have to pass down to to the nest generation. So, we ought to try to keep the earth health.

Hello there!   I appreciate your effort in making your homework. The first part of the composition is good. However, I was a little bit confused when I read the sentence with the trivial choices. It was a little bit confusing to me. Anyway, let\'s talk about it tomorrow in class. See you!   ~Teacher Shanee   The most serious problem in the world is global warming. >>> Correct!By doing something to influence it in our daily lives, glacier is decreasing. >>> By doing things that could affect the overall temperature of the Earth\'s atmosphere, glaciers are decreasing.Whenever summer comes, we always use air conditioners. >>> Correct!Although there is a substitute such as electric fan, we excessively use them. >>> OR: Due to the high temperature, we overuse electric fans that could be substitutes for air conditioners.Because of these trivial choices, maybe any islands will disappear someday.>>> Correct! (This sentence is correct but I can\'t understand the trivial choices you\'re talking about.) Moreover, most of the people who do not do it also harm damage. >>> Moreover, most of the people who do not do it also suffer from the damage.The earth we live in is not ours and we have to pass down to to the nest generation. >>> The earth we live in is not ours and we have to pass it down to the next generation.So, we ought to try to keep the earth health. >>> So we ought to try to keep the earth safe to live in.