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2014-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

I experienced something that changed me in a positive way. After attending a university, I regularly volunteered in special-education school. At that time, I had low self-esteem because I was not satisfied with my school and the level of school is low. However, by voluteering, my thought was changed naturally. Although my school is not a good university, I believed I am worth morn than I thought. Since then, I have volunteered for about 900 hours. Voluntary work makes me as well as other people satisfied with our own lives.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, dearest!   We have a lot of experiences in life that  affected us in different ways. There are some that changed us into a better person but there are bitter ones that affected us negatively. No matter what happenings we experience, how we see and handle things in our life is what\'s important.   Have a great day!   ~Teacher Shanee   I experienced something that changed me in a positive way. >>> Correct!After attending a university, I regularly volunteered in special-education school. >>> After attending a university, I regularly volunteered in a special-education school.At that time, I had low self-esteem because I was not satisfied with my school and the level of school is low. >>> At that time, I had low self-esteem because I was not satisfied with my school because its level is low.However, by voluteering, my thought was changed naturally. >>> Correct!Although my school is not a good university, I believed I am worth morn than I thought. >>> Although my school is not a good university, I believe that I am worth more than what I thought of myself.Since then, I have volunteered for about 900 hours. >>> Correct!Voluntary work makes me as well as other people satisfied with our own lives. >>> Like other people, voulunteer works make me feel satisfied with my life.  

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