Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I experienced something that changed me in a positive way.
After attending a university, I regularly volunteered in special-education school.
At that time, I had low self-esteem because I was not satisfied with my school and the level of school is low.
However, by voluteering, my thought was changed naturally.
Although my school is not a good university, I believed I am worth morn than I thought.
Since then, I have volunteered for about 900 hours.
Voluntary work makes me as well as other people satisfied with our own lives.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, dearest!
We have a lot of experiences in life that affected us in
different ways. There are some that changed us into a better person but there
are bitter ones that affected us negatively. No matter what happenings we experience, how
we see and handle things in our life is what\'s important.
Have a great day!
~Teacher Shanee
I experienced something that changed me in a positive way.
>>> Correct!After attending a university, I regularly volunteered in special-education school.
>>> After attending a university, I regularly volunteered in a special-education school.At that time, I had low self-esteem because I was not satisfied with my school and the level of school is low.
>>> At that time, I had low self-esteem because I was not satisfied with my school because its level is low.However, by voluteering, my thought was changed naturally.
>>> Correct!Although my school is not a good university, I believed I am worth morn than I thought.
>>> Although my school is not a good university, I believe that I am worth more than what I thought of myself.Since then, I have volunteered for about 900 hours.
>>> Correct!Voluntary work makes me as well as other people satisfied with our own lives.
>>> Like other people, voulunteer works make me feel satisfied with my life.
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