Today's homework!!

2014-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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If you could study in one of the prestigious schools around the world, I would study in Harvard University. Maybe, everyone wants to study with smart students. I think by studying with them, my value is increasing although it is not real. Besides, this school can lessen the burden of tuition. I got to know this information through Korean TV program. Its tuition is nearly one hundred million won in a year. However, there are some scholarship to help poor students. So, I want to study in Harvard University.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday my dear [이름]! A lot of students want to study in a reputable school like Harvard University. However, college education is an undertaking for most families. It is true that the university where you\'ve studied has a big impact when you look for a job in the future. But your ability and skills play a bigger role. Keep enhancing your skills and don\'t think too much about the school.   Take care and see you after two weeks!   ~Teacher Shanee   If you could study in one of the prestigious schools around the world, I would study in Harvard University. >>> If I could study in one of the prestigious schools around the world, I would study in Harvard University.Maybe, everyone wants to study with smart students. >>> Correct!I think by studying with them, my value is increasing although it is not real. >>> I think by studying with them, my value will increase. >>> OR: I think if I study with smart students, my abilities will be enhanced.Besides, this school can lessen the burden of tuition. >>> Correct!>>> OR: Besides, they offer financial aid in this school.I got to know this information through Korean TV program. >>> I got to know this information through a Korean TV program.Its tuition is nearly one hundred million won in a year. >>> Correct!However, there are some scholarship to help poor students. >>> Correct!So, I want to study in Harvard University. >>> Correct!

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