Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
If you could study in one of the prestigious schools around the world, I would study in Harvard University.
Maybe, everyone wants to study with smart students.
I think by studying with them, my value is increasing although it is not real.
Besides, this school can lessen the burden of tuition.
I got to know this information through Korean TV program.
Its tuition is nearly one hundred million won in a year.
However, there are some scholarship to help poor students.
So, I want to study in Harvard University.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday my dear [이름]!
A lot of students want to study in a reputable school like Harvard University.
However, college education is an undertaking for most families. It is true that the university where you\'ve studied has a big
impact when you look for a job in the future. But your ability and skills play a bigger role.
Keep enhancing your skills and don\'t think too much about the school.
Take care and see you after two weeks!
~Teacher Shanee
If you could study in one of the prestigious schools around the world, I would study in Harvard University.
>>> If I could study in one of the prestigious schools around the world, I would study in Harvard University.Maybe, everyone wants to study with smart students.
>>> Correct!I think by studying with them, my value is increasing although it is not real.
>>> I think by studying with them, my value will increase.
>>> OR: I think if I study with smart students, my abilities will be enhanced.Besides, this school can lessen the burden of tuition.
>>> Correct!>>> OR: Besides, they offer financial aid in this school.I got to know this information through Korean TV program.
>>> I got to know this information through a Korean TV program.Its tuition is nearly one hundred million won in a year.
>>> Correct!However, there are some scholarship to help poor students.
>>> Correct!So, I want to study in Harvard University.
>>> Correct!
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