Today's homework!!

2014-12-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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There are two things make me happy. The first thing is to meet and talk with my boyfriend. We have been dating for about two years. However, I like him very very much until now. So, I always have fun with him. The second thing is to stay at my room. Although my room is not spacious, I feel comfortable. While being at my room, I usually watch TV programs that I could not see. Thanks to these things, I have lived happily. ------------------------------------------------ I'm sorry teacherㅠㅠ. I got up late this morning. so I could not answer the phone. While ringing my cellular phone, I was busying preparing for going out.ㅜㅜ

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear!   I was about to prepare to go home when I saw your homework. Thanks for sending this. I am now happy to know that you are okay. Take good care and enjoy your day okay?   ~Teacher Shanee   There are two things make me happy. >>> There are two things that make me happy.The first thing is to meet and talk with my boyfriend. >>> Correct!>>> OR :The first one is meeting and talking with my boyfriend.We have been dating for about two years. >>> Correct!However, I like him very very much until now. >>> Correct!So, I always have fun with him. >>> Correct!The second thing is to stay at my room. >>> The second thing is staying in my room.Although my room is not spacious, I feel comfortable. >>> Correct!While being at my room, I usually watch TV programs that I could not see. >>> While being in my room, I usually watch TV programs that I couldn\'t watch before.Thanks to these things, I have lived happily. >>> Correct!------------------------------------------------I\'m sorry teacherㅠㅠ. >>> Correct!I got up late this morning. so I could not answer the phone. >>> I got up late this morning, so I could not answer the phone. While ringing my cellular phone, I was busying preparing for going out.ㅜㅜ >>> While my phone was ringing, I was busy preparing to go out. 

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