Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two things make me happy.
The first thing is to meet and talk with my boyfriend.
We have been dating for about two years.
However, I like him very very much until now.
So, I always have fun with him.
The second thing is to stay at my room.
Although my room is not spacious, I feel comfortable.
While being at my room, I usually watch TV programs that I could not see.
Thanks to these things, I have lived happily.
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I'm sorry teacherㅠㅠ.
I got up late this morning. so I could not answer the phone.
While ringing my cellular phone, I was busying preparing for going out.ㅜㅜ
강사 첨삭
Hi there my dear!
I was about to prepare to go home when I saw your homework.
Thanks for sending this. I am now happy to know that you are okay.
Take good care and enjoy your day okay?
~Teacher Shanee
There are two things make me happy.
>>> There are two things that make me happy.The first thing is to meet and talk with my boyfriend.
>>> Correct!>>> OR :The first one is meeting and talking with my boyfriend.We have been dating for about two years.
>>> Correct!However, I like him very very much until now.
>>> Correct!So, I always have fun with him.
>>> Correct!The second thing is to stay at my room.
>>> The second thing is staying in my room.Although my room is not spacious, I feel comfortable.
>>> Correct!While being at my room, I usually watch TV programs that I could not see.
>>> While being in my room, I usually watch TV programs that I couldn\'t watch before.Thanks to these things, I have lived happily.
>>> Correct!------------------------------------------------I\'m sorry teacherㅠㅠ.
>>> Correct!I got up late this morning. so I could not answer the phone.
>>> I got up late this morning, so I could not answer the phone.
While ringing my cellular phone, I was busying preparing for going out.ㅜㅜ
>>> While my phone was ringing, I was busy preparing to go out.
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