Today's homework!!

What do the people in your community do for recreation? In my community, there are several tennis courts. Although the weather is cold, some people enjoy playing tennis. Moreover, there is a stream like Cheonggye Stream. On both sides of stream, there are trails. To take a subway, I have to pass by the trails. Whenever I see them, some people are enjoying jogging and running. The place was not good for exercising. However, it was developed a few years ago.

Hi there my dear [이름]!   Happy Tuesday! Thanks for being consistent in doing your homework. You\'re really responsible. Please continue to be one. Anyway, check the corrections I made. If there is something that you can\'t understand, don\'t forget to ask me tomorrow in class.   ~Teacher Shanee     What do the people in your community do for recreation?In my community, there are several tennis courts. >>> Correct!Although the weather is cold, some people enjoy playing tennis. >>> Correct!Moreover, there is a stream like Cheonggye Stream. >>> Correct!On both sides of stream, there are trails. >>> On both sides of the stream, there are trails.To take a subway, I have to pass by the trails. >>> To take the subway, I have to pass by the trails.Whenever I see them, some people are enjoying jogging and running. >>> Whenever I look around, come people are enjoying jogging and running.The place was not good for exercising. >>> Correct!However, it was developed a few years ago. >>> Correct!