Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
What song influence you the most?
There is no specific song which influences me the most.
While I have lived for 23 years, I have not been influenced by any songs.
I just like listening to music and enjoy singing along.
I think that song cannot influence people and only can make people excited.
Although it has good lyric, it never impact on people.
강사 첨삭
Happy brand new week [이름]!
It\'s been said that some songs influence people in a big way.
Particular songs can change the way how some people see the world.
Some can be affected negatively or positively. Others can relate because
their experiences are associated with the lyrics.
Enjoy listening to songs.
~Teacher Shanee
What song influence you the most? There is no specific song which influences me the most.
>>> Correct!While I have lived for 23 years, I have not been influenced by any songs.
>>> Correct! I just like listening to music and enjoy singing along.
>>> Correct!I think that song cannot influence people and only can make people excited.>>> I think that song cannot influence people and can only make people excited.
Although it has good lyric, it never impact on people.
>>> Although it has good lyrics, it never has impact on people.
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