Today's homework!!

2014-12-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

A busy day Mrs. [Name] was very busy today. She drove to a butchers' shop for some ham. Then she went to the supermarket to get some mashed potatoes and powdered sugar. She needed diapers for her baby and some clothespins. Then her daughter Sally saw the candy store and Mrs. [Name] bought her some cotton candy. At home she put everything into the closet. Then she opened the faucet, filled water into a pot and put it on the stove.

강사 첨삭

A great day my dear!   It seems you understood the whole composition well. I am so proud of you. I applaud you for not failing to make your homework. Please don\'t get tired to continue doing that. Your effort will pay-off in time.   Enjoy your weekend!   ~Teacher Shanee   A busy dayMrs Fisher was very busy today. She drove to a butchers\' shop for some ham. >>> Correct! Then she went to the supermarket to get some mashed potatoes and powdered sugar. >>> Correct! She needed diapers for her baby and some clothespins. >>> Correct! Then her daughter Sally saw the candy store and Mrs. [Name] bought her some cotton candy. >>> Correct! At home she put everything into the closet. >>> Correct! Then she opened the faucet, filled water into a pot and put it on the stove. >>> Correct!

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