Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Is there anything in your past that you would like to change? How would you change it if you could?
There is one thing in my past I would like to change.
It was five years ago.
At that time, I went to the university after graduating from high school.
However, I was not satisfied with the university.
So, I quit it and studied to take a university entrance exam again.
Although I wanted to do that, I didn't study hard.
Eventually, I entered the second university which is not a top school.
If I could turn back the time, I will study not to regret.
강사 첨삭
Good day my dear [이름]!
We couldn\'t say that our actions are good without even seeing the result.
Thus, it\'s better to think a lot of times first before deciding or working on something.
As for your case, you chose to take another exam but the result didn\'t satisfy you.
You weren\'t able to study hard even if you wanted to due to some reasons. That\'s already the past
and there\'s a cliche, you couldn\'t turn back time. However, you cannot just give up. Instead, fight on and
move on for your future.
Always,
~Teacher Shanee
Is there anything in your past that you would like to change? How would you change it if you could?There is one thing in my past I would like to change.
>>> Correct!It was five years ago.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: It was what happened five years ago.At that time, I went to the university after graduating from high school.
>>> Correct!However, I was not satisfied with the university.
>>> Correct!So, I quit it and studied to take a university entrance exam again.
>>> Correct!Although I wanted to do that, I didn\'t study hard.
>>> Although I wanted to, I didn\'t study hard.Eventually, I entered the second university which is not a top school.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: As a result, I was only able to enter a lower-ranked school.If I could turn back the time, I will study not to regret.
>>> If I could turn back the time, I would study harder so I wouldn\'t regret.
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