Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
I think voting should be compulsory.
In Korea, people don't have the responsibility of vote.
So, voter turnout is always low.
People think election day is just a holiday.
Although people have a choice to do or not to do, the results of voting cab be changed depending on their choices.
Moreover, people can change their nations with a little effort.
So, they need to have interests in vote.
Also, To increase turnout, a nation need to make a law which enforces people to vote.
강사 첨삭
A wonderful Monday my dearest!
It\'s good to see your opinion about the topic.
I agree that voting is a very important action.
It could determine the future of a country.
Thus, it is necessary that people comply to this.
Thanks for sending this in.^^
~Teacher Shanee
I think voting should be compulsory.
>>> Correct!In Korea, people don\'t have the responsibility of vote.
>>> In Korea, people don\'t have the responsibility to vote.
>>> OR: In Korea, people are not forced to vote.So, voter turnout is always low.
>>> Correct! People think election day is just a holiday.
>>> Correct!Although people have a choice to do or not to do, the results of voting cab be changed depending on their choices.
>>> It is because people can choose whether to vote or not, the result of the election depends on the people\'s decision.Moreover, people can change their nations with a little effort.
>>> Correct! So, they need to have interests in vote.
>>> So they need to be interested in voting.Also, To increase turnout, a nation need to make a law which enforces people to vote.
>>> Also, to increase the turnout, a nation needs to make a law which enforces people to vote.
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