today's homework

Choose a form of transportation (such as cars, trains, boats, planes, or subways) and explain how it has changed people's lives. According to my experience, planes affect me to enjoy my vacation abroad. Every summer, I visit overseas lands to have a rest. If planes are not invented, my journey is limited to domestic land. Of course, domestic travel is really fun. But it is also sure that traveling overseas by planes provide us abundant experience.

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Good job in writing this composition. As someone who loves traveling, I have to agree with you. Planes are one of the best inventions ever.   Kindly check the corrections below.   Ciao!   ~Teacher Marie~   According to my experience, planes affect me to enjoy my vacation abroad. >> Based on  my experience, planes help me enjoy my vacation abroad. Every summer, I visit overseas lands to have a rest. >> Every summer, I visit foreign countries to take a rest. If planes are not invented, my journey is limited to domestic land.>> If planes were not invented, my journey would be limited to domestic/local trips. Of course, domestic travel is really fun. >> CORRECT!   But it is also sure that traveling overseas by planes provide us abundant experience. >> But I\'m sure that traveling overseas by planes can provide us with more abundant experiences.