Today's homework!!
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A few decades ago, people thought that relationship between neighbors is better than relationship with relatives who live far apart.
Because they live near our house, they could help in anytime.
However, these days, there is no affection and talk with neighbors anymore.
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A few decades ago, people thought that relationship between neighbors is better than relationship with relatives who live far apart.
>>> A few decades ago, people thought that the relationship between neighbors was better than the relationship between relatives who live far apart.Because they live near our house, they could help in anytime.
>>> Because they live near our house, they can help anytime.However, these days, there is no affection and talk with neighbors anymore.
>>> Correct!
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