today's homework!!

2015-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

Long time ago, there was no language in the world. So, people could'nt converse by speaking. But, as the years passed, various languages had been made in various countries. - I'm not interested in languages. So, I can't explain the change of that.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! I am wondering how you are doing there. Are you enjoying your vacation? I really hope so! Take good care of yourself, okay? I am excited ee you on Monday!   ~Teacher Shanee   Long time ago, there was no language in the world. >>> Correct!So, people could\'nt converse by speaking. >>> Correct! >>> So people converse orally.But, as the years passed, various languages had been made in various countries. >>> Correct!- I\'m not interested in languages. >>> Correct!So, I can\'t explain the change of that. >>> So I can\'t explain the changes being made.

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