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2015-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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What law in your country would you like to change? Why? In my country, criminal can be sentenced to death. However, the executions of criminal have not carried out for about two decades. I think that we need to make a new law to save our taxes. The new law will have to say as below. "If someone is sentenced to death, the execution will have to be taken place in one week." To give them food and electricity, Korea has wasted people's taxes. So, I would like to change the related law about death penalty.

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Thanks [이름]! I am always happy to see your homework being accomplished! Take care and enjoy the rest of your day, okay?   ~Teacher Shanee   What law in your country would you like to change? Why?In my country, criminal can be sentenced to death. >>> In my country, criminals can be sentenced to death.However, the executions of criminal have not carried out for about two decades. >>> Correct! [execution]I think that we need to make a new law to save our taxes. >>> Correct!The new law will have to say as below. >>> The new law could be as what\'s been stated below.\"If someone is sentenced to death, the execution will have to be taken place in one week.\"To give them food and electricity, Korea has wasted people\'s taxes. >>> Correct!So, I would like to change the related law about death penalty. >>> So, I would like to change the law related to death penalty.

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