Today's homework!!

In Korea, many parents let their children study abroad. The ages of the children are becoming young as the years passed. Although they study abroad to learn languages, all of them can't success. They rather got to know drugs. They had wasted their time in enjoying bad things in other country. So, I think the investment about studying abroad is risky.

Good afternoon [이름]!   Kindly check the corrections that I made below. If you have some questions about them, ask me tomorrow in class! Thanks!   ~Teacher Shanee   In Korea, many parents let their children study abroad. >>> Correct!The ages of the children are becoming young as the years passed. >>> Correct! >>> OR: The ages of the children are decreasing as the years passed.Although they study abroad to learn languages, all of them can\'t success. >>> Although they study abroad to learn languages, all of them don\'t\'t succeed.They rather got to know drugs. >>> They had rather got to use drugs.They had wasted their time in enjoying bad things in other country. >>> Correct!So, I think the investment about studying abroad is risky. >>> Correct!