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What is the effect of a person’s eating habits to how long he/she will live?
To how long people will live, people have to be careful about their eating habits.
Depending on eating habits, we will be fat or unhealthy.
Although someone have much time to exercise, he may have a disease.
Korean food is normally spicy and salty.
So, we need to care about the food which we will eat.
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What is the effect of a person’s eating habits to how long he/she will live?To how long people will live, people have to be careful about their eating habits.
>>> Correct!Depending on eating habits, we will be fat or unhealthy.
>>> Correct!Although someone have much time to exercise, he may have a disease.
>>> Although someone has much time to exercise, he may have a disease.Korean food is normally spicy and salty.
>>> Correct! So, we need to care about the food which we will eat.
>>> So, we need to care about the food we eat.
>>> OR: So, we need to be aware of the food we take in.
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