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2015-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

The best traditional celebration is Korean Thanksgiving Day. It is a kind of harvest festival. So, there are many kinds of food on this holiday. Also, I can meet my relatives who live far apart. Although it takes long time to go to my grandparent's house, I feel happy.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon my dear [이름]!   Thanks for making this compositions!^^ I heard a lot about your Thanksgiving Day and it seems like a very interesting celebration. I know it is one of the two biggest celebrations in your country. Anyway, only a few months from now and you will hold this celebration again.^^   See you again tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee   The best traditional celebration is Korean Thanksgiving Day. >>> Correct!It is a kind of harvest festival. >>> Correct!So, there are many kinds of food on this holiday. >>> Correct!Also, I can meet my relatives who live far apart. >>> Correct! Although it takes long time to go to my grandparent\'s house, I feel happy. >>> Although it takes a long time to go to my grandfather\'s house, I feel happy.

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