Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
The best traditional celebration is Korean Thanksgiving Day.
It is a kind of harvest festival.
So, there are many kinds of food on this holiday.
Also, I can meet my relatives who live far apart.
Although it takes long time to go to my grandparent's house, I feel happy.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon my dear [이름]!
Thanks for making this compositions!^^
I heard a lot about your Thanksgiving Day and it seems like a very
interesting celebration. I know it is one of the two biggest celebrations in your country.
Anyway, only a few months from now and you will hold this celebration again.^^
See you again tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee
The best traditional celebration is Korean Thanksgiving Day.
>>> Correct!It is a kind of harvest festival.
>>> Correct!So, there are many kinds of food on this holiday.
>>> Correct!Also, I can meet my relatives who live far apart.
>>> Correct! Although it takes long time to go to my grandparent\'s house, I feel happy.
>>> Although it takes a long time to go to my grandfather\'s house, I feel happy.
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