Today's homework!!

2015-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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The best way to resolve poverty is very simple and only one. It is the rich help the poor without no reason. I think the rich have much money that can't spend until dying and can't count for one day. If one of the rich dies, his money will not be his possessions. So, they don't have to be greedy about money. If government helps the poor, all types of taxes will be higher and many people will not be able to afford them. So, they may be the poor. What the rich help is the fastest way to resolve poverty although there is a few generous rich people.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear!   It\'s hump day again! I hope you are having a great day. Below are the corrections for your sentences. Kindly, go over them. Take care!   ~Teacher Shanee   The best way to resolve poverty is very simple and only one. >>> Correct!It is the rich help the poor without no reason. >>> It is by rich people helping the poor ones without reservations.I think the rich have much money that can\'t spend until dying and can\'t count for one day. >>> I think the rich have too much money that they can\'t even spend until they die and that can\'t be counted for only one day.If one of the rich dies, his money will not be his possessions. >>> If a rich person dies, he couldn\'t take his money to his grave.So, they don\'t have to be greedy about money. >>> Correct!If government helps the poor, all types of taxes will be higher and many people will not be able to afford them. >>> Correct! [the government] So, they may be the poor. >>> So, they might become poorer.What the rich help is the fastest way to resolve poverty although there is a few generous rich people. >>> Rich people helping the poor ones is the fatest way to resolve poverty. However, there is only a few generous rich people.

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