Today's homework!!

2015-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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If I make a decision, the advantage of doing that should be considered first. I have made many decisions until now. On all such occasions, I thought this decision could bring something to me. I don't want to do anything if there is no advantage. Maybe, other people also think so too.

강사 첨삭

A delightful Thursday my dear [이름]!   Making a decision is a very crucial state. It could get positive outcome or the opposite. Thus, thinking several times before coming up with a decision is very important. We must consider the consequences of our actions first. Always be careful in making your decisions.^^   ~Teacher Shanee   If I make a decision, the advantage of doing that should be considered first. >>> Correct!I have made many decisions until now. >>> Correct!On all such occasions, I thought this decision could bring something to me. >>> In all such occassions, I thought about the benefits I could get from the decicions I would make. I don\'t want to do anything if there is no advantage. >>> Correct!Maybe, other people also think so too. >>> Correct!>>> OR: Maybe other people think the same too.

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