Today's homework!!
학생이 쓴 원문
If I make a decision, the advantage of doing that should be considered first.
I have made many decisions until now.
On all such occasions, I thought this decision could bring something to me.
I don't want to do anything if there is no advantage.
Maybe, other people also think so too.
강사 첨삭
A delightful Thursday my dear [이름]!
Making a decision is a very crucial state.
It could get positive outcome or the opposite.
Thus, thinking several times before coming up with a decision is very important.
We must consider the consequences of our actions first.
Always be careful in making your decisions.^^
~Teacher Shanee
If I make a decision, the advantage of doing that should be considered first.
>>> Correct!I have made many decisions until now.
>>> Correct!On all such occasions, I thought this decision could bring something to me.
>>> In all such occassions, I thought about the benefits I could get from the decicions I would make.
I don\'t want to do anything if there is no advantage.
>>> Correct!Maybe, other people also think so too.
>>> Correct!>>> OR: Maybe other people think the same too.
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