today's homework!!

2015-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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When I see the word 'future', I feel uncomfortable for no reaaon. I'm a senior. So, I will graduate from my university in 2016, February. However, I am still thinking of the job wich I have to get. So, I am very nervous and I want to have more time think about that. Although I took a year off last year, I am still not sure that. Becuase no one can help me, I have to deal with this problenm by myself. So, I feel more nervous than before

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!   I understand how you feel. I\'ve been into that situation before. I think most students feel that way. At least you realized that you have to deal with that problem now. Keep looking for the things you really want to do in the future. See ya!   ~Teacher Shanee   When I see the word \'future\', I feel uncomfortable for no reaaon. >>> Correct!I\'m a senior. >>> OR: I\'m a senior university student.So, I will graduate from my university in 2016, February. >>> So I will graduate from the university in February, 2016.However, I am still thinking of the job wich I have to get. >>> Correct!So, I am very nervous and I want to have more time think about that. >>> So I am very nervous and I want to have more time to think about that.Although I took a year off last year, I am still not sure that. >>> Correct!Becuase no one can help me, I have to deal with this problenm by myself. >>> Correct! [Because]So, I feel more nervous than before >>> Correct! [Put the right punctuation mark at the end of the sentence.]

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