Today's homework!!

The present system of education in Korea encourages students to have much time to study. So, some of students kill theirshelves every year because of the stress. I think although someone spends much time studying, the results of study may not be good. Moreover, all people don't have any interests in study. So, the present education system can't influence on students positively.

Hello there again!   It is not bad to strive hard in terms of studying. However, students have to know how to make a balance. Relaxing sometimes won\'t negatively affect your studies. Instead, it can further enhance your performance. Don\'t stress yourself too much.^^   ~Teacher Shanee   The present system of education in Korea encourages students to have much time to study. >>> Correct!So, some of students kill theirshelves every year because of the stress. >>> So some students kill themselves every year because of stress. >>> OR: So suicide among students happen every year.I think although someone spends much time studying, the results of study may not be good. >>> I think although someone spends much time studying, the results may not be good.Moreover, all people don\'t have any interests in study. >>> Correct!>>> OR: Moreover, not all people are interested in studying.So, the present education system can\'t influence on students positively. >>> So, the present education system can\'t influence students in a positive way.