Today's homework!!

2015-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

I think success and happiness depend on factors beyond their control. For example, someone who have much money can do everything regardless of effort and patience. Money is the most important things in modern societies. No one says that money is not everything. So,many people try to earn much money and spend more time working than time with their family. teacher, I postpone the rest of my class until June. Maybe, today's class might be our last class because the time and teacher of my class may be changed. I have been so happy in speaking English with you. Until then, take care of yourself. bye.ㅠㅠ

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday my dear [이름]!   I am so sad and I will definitely miss you! But I am still hoping that we\'ll be given the chance to study together again in the future. Don\'t stop learning the language. Always use and practice it. Remember that with contant practice, you\'ll definitely improve your communication skills. Take good care!   ~Teacher Shanee   I think success and happiness depend on factors beyond their control. >>> I think success and happiness depend on factors beyond people\'s control.For example, someone who have much money can do everything regardless of effort and patience. >>> For example, someone who has too much money can do everything regardless of effort and patience.Money is the most important things in modern societies. >>> Money is the most important thing in modern society.No one says that money is not everything. >>> Correct!So,many people try to earn much money and spend more time working than time with their family.>>> So many people try to earn much and spend more time at work than with their family.teacher, I postpone the rest of my class until June. >>> Teacher, I postponed the rest of my class until June.Maybe, today\'s class might be our last class because the time and teacher of my class may be changed. >>> Today might be our last class because the time and teacher might be changed.I have been so happy in speaking English with you. >>> Correct!Until then, take care of yourself. bye.ㅠㅠ >>> Correct! [Bye!]

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