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Hi,Teacher! This is [Name]. Let's start my homework. Today's Question : Do you believe that equality for women means that women should also do such things as military service? My answer: No, I think that Korea is not equality about women. In Korea, man's monthly pay is more expensive than women's monthly pay. And in compay, man is more prefer than woman because of physique power and children problem. If somebody exiger women's military service for eqality, I will say them that that don't make any sense to ! That's it. Thanks you!

Hey, [이름]! What\'s up?^^ How have you been doing? Thank you for another composition that you made for me. Your ideas are good enough to be shared to different people!^^ I hope you can check your corrections so you can learn from them.^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi,Teacher! >> Hi, teacher!This is [Name]. >> This is good. Let\'s start my homework.>> CorrectToday\'s Question : Do you believe that equality for women means that women should also do such things as military service?My answer:No, I think that Korea is not equality about women. >> No, I think that Korea doesn\'t show equality towards women.In Korea, man\'s monthly pay is more expensive than women\'s monthly pay. >> In Korea, a man\'s monthly pay is higher than a woman\'s monthly pay. And in compay, man is more prefer than woman because of physique power and children problem.>> And in a company, a man is more preferred than a woman because of the physique power and children complications. If somebody exiger women\'s military service for eqality, I will say them that that don\'t make any sense to ! >> If somebody emphasized/insisted that women should be part of the equality, I would tell them that it wouldn\'t make sense at all. That\'s it. Thanks you! >> That\'s it. Thank you!