Today's homework
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Have a good time !
Q: What is the most dangerous thing in your home for an elderly person? How can it be made less dangerous?
A: I think gas stove is the most dangerous thing in my home.
We can see gas fire in newspaper.
The elderly person does often forget turnning off gas stove.
Umm.. I don't have to be made dangerous....
But, the childrens must be check gas stove and do say their parents.
That's it. Thank you.^.^
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Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you once again for doing your homework.
Your answer is very unique!^^
I think I have to remind the people at my place to
take necessary precautions for the elderly.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi,teacher!
>> CorrectHave a good time !>>CorrectQ: What is the most dangerous thing in your home for an elderly person? How can it be made less dangerous?A: I think gas stove is the most dangerous thing in my home.
>> I think the gas stove is the most dangerous thing in my home/at home.We can see gas fire in newspaper.
>>CorrectThe elderly person does often forget turnning off gas stove.
>>The elderly often forgets turning off the gas stove.Umm.. I don\'t have to be made dangerous....
>>I don\'t have to make it very dangerous.But, the childrens must be check gas stove and do say their parents.>>But the children must be checked by their parents when they are near the gas stove.That\'s it. Thank you.^.^
>>Correct
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