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2015-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi,teacher! Have a good time ! Q: What is the most dangerous thing in your home for an elderly person? How can it be made less dangerous? A: I think gas stove is the most dangerous thing in my home. We can see gas fire in newspaper. The elderly person does often forget turnning off gas stove. Umm.. I don't have to be made dangerous.... But, the childrens must be check gas stove and do say their parents. That's it. Thank you.^.^

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Hello, [이름]!^^ Thank you once again for doing your homework. Your answer is very unique!^^ I think I have to remind the people at my place to take necessary precautions for the elderly. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi,teacher! >> CorrectHave a good time !>>CorrectQ: What is the most dangerous thing in your home for an elderly person? How can it be made less dangerous?A: I think gas stove is the most dangerous thing in my home. >> I think the gas stove is the most dangerous thing in my home/at home.We can see gas fire in newspaper. >>CorrectThe elderly person does often forget turnning off gas stove. >>The elderly often forgets turning off the gas stove.Umm.. I don\'t have to be made dangerous.... >>I don\'t have to make it very dangerous.But, the childrens must be check gas stove and do say their parents.>>But the children must be checked by their parents when they are near the gas stove.That\'s it. Thank you.^.^ >>Correct

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