Today's homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi,teacher~
Essay:
What can be done throughout the house to prevent accidents?
Answer:
In my opinion, I hit often from the item's corner.
So if I wear guard form the item, I will not sick.
Second, My parents do slip often in toilet.
So if we polish the water of toilet floor, we will not slip.
That's it. Thank you.
See you tomorrow morning.
강사 첨삭
Good morning again, [이름]!
I\'m sorry if I checked your homework a little late.
Anyhow, please be careful with house accidents because they
are more difficult to prevent.
Please be safe all the time.
Have a wonderful weekend!^^~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi,teacher~>>CorrectEssay:What can be done throughout the house to prevent accidents?Answer:In my opinion, I hit often from the item\'s corner.
>>In my opinion, I often hit from a corner of an object.So if I wear guard form the item, I will not sick.
>>So if I put a guard form on the item, I will not be hurt.Second, My parents do slip often in toilet.
>>Second, my parents often slip in the toilet.So if we polish the water of toilet floor, we will not slip.>>Correct.That\'s it. Thank you.
>>CorrectSee you tomorrow morning.
>>Correct
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