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2015-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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<Question> Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response. <Answer> I tell you a movie that called by 'The 100-year-old Man Who Climbed Out the Window and Disappeared '. The 100-year-old Man is courageous and cofident. I envy him and I want to became him. When I finish watching the movie, I look back me and self-reflection. That's it. Thank you.

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Hello there, [이름]! Here are the corrections that I made in your composition. Thank you for sharing this movie. I will try to look for a copy and watch it, too!~~Teacher Erine~~ <Question>Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response.<Answer>I tell you a movie that called by \'The 100-year-old Man Who Climbed Out the Window and Disappeared \'. >> I will tell you about the movie called \"The 100-year-old man who climbed out the window and disappeared\". The 100-year-old Man is courageous and cofident. >> The man is courageous and confident.I envy him and I want to became him. >> I envy him and I want to become him.When I finish watching the movie, I look back me and self-reflection. >> When I finish watching the movie, I look back at myself and do self-reflection.That\'s it. Thank you. >> Correct.

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