today's homework.

2015-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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question : of all the places you have been to(in your country or abroad) which was your favorite? why? my answer : i really love traveling. three months ago i went to go in italy. italy is awesome. everything was beautiful and amazing. especially i love there. called name of the "water's of city" in venezia! is there a famous seefood. it is very fresh and delicious. all of the construction is vintage and at night view is very nice. i want to go venezia again. that's it thanks :)

강사 첨삭

Hi there Carla!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about our topic for today.

And please do not forget to review the corrections below.
Thank you for today and see you again tomorrow.

Enjoy the rest of day. Take care.


Always,

Kathrine ^^


question : of all the places you have been to(in your country or abroad) which was your favorite? why?

my answer :
i really love traveling.

>> correct! (capitalization)

>> or: I really love to travel.
 three months ago i went to go in italy. 

>> Three months ago, I went to Italy.
 italy is awesome.

>> correct! (capitalization)

>> or: It is awesome in Italy.

everything was beautiful and amazing.

>> correct! (capitalization)
 especially i love there. called name of the \"water\'s of city\" in venezia!

>> What I especially love there is the city called Venezia which is also called the \"water of the city\"
 is there a famous seefood.

>>  There is also a famous sea food.

it is very fresh and delicious. 

>> correct! (capitalization) 
 all of the construction is vintage and at night view is very nice. 

>> All the constructions are vintage and the night view is also very nice.
 i want to go venezia again.
>> I want to go to Venezia again.
that\'s it
thanks :)

>>  correct! (capitalization)

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