Today's homework
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Hello!
Happy Thursday! I hope you\'re doing great today. :)
Thank you for answering the question I have given you. You have been very diligent in making your assignment and you try your best to comply with what is expected of you. For that, I would like to commend you. You still have to work on your tenses more though. To improve, you have to keep on practising. Just keep on doing that and your hard work would soon pay off. I know you can make it. Take care. Enjoy your day!
~~Teacher Erine~~
< Question >
Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
<Answer>
In my opinion, I fell good about them that treat their pets as members of their family.
>>In my opinion, I feel good about people who treat their pets as members of their family.
I tell you why I think so.
>> I will tell you why.
Or >> I think so because,
First, the pets have life.
>>CORRECT
Or>>The pets have their own life.
Second, the pets eat and sleep and take a shower with us.
>>CORRECT
Or>> Second, the pets eat, sleep, and take a shower with us.
Third, the pets give us happy.
>> Third, the pets make us happy.
So, I agree their think.
>> So I agree with them.
That\'s it. Thank you.
>>CORRECT
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