today's homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you prefer to work 7 days a week and make a lot of money, or work 5 days a week and make an average amount?
->I will take the work 5days a week and make an average amount.
becacuse I think important of my life it is getting the self-development time.
Human are advance self continually.
If I have too much money but I don't have enough time I can't spend my money.
I think more important is a "time"
that's it
강사 첨삭
Hi there Clara!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. And I really do agree with you.
Anyway, see you again tomorrow!
Always, Kathrine ^^
Would you prefer to work 7 days a week and make a lot of money, or work 5 days a week and make an average amount?->I will take the work 5days a week and make an average amount.
>> I will take the work for 5 days a week and make an average amount.becacuse I think important of my life it is getting the self-development time.
>> becaue I think that the importance of my life is to get a time for my self-development. Human are advance self continually.
>> Humans are advancing continually. If I have too much money but I don\'t have enough time I can\'t spend my money.
>> correct! I think more important is a \"time\"
>> I think that the most important is time. that\'s it >> That is all I want to say.
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