Today's homework^^

I think I have to follow my advice, because I can think a lot, and when it happens again I can remember and easily figure out. And I can have a good advice then other people's advice. When I follow other people's advice I can figure it out fastly and more good, but they can give a bad advice, and I can have a good advice.Sometimes, I think about it but there is no good advice, I need their advice to figure out. I think I have to follow my advice but, when I think about it and there is no answer I will follow other people's advice. Before, I will think about when it is the good advice I will act, but when it is not a good advice I will think more or ask to another people.

Hi there my dear [이름]!   Thanks for doing your best to accomplish this. I commend you. Anyway, please check the corrections below. See you tomorrow.   ~Teacher Shanee   I think I have to follow my advice, because I can think a lot, and when it happens again I can remember and easily figure out. >>> I think I have to follow my own decision because I thought about it a lot. But if the situation happens again, I think I can easily figure out what to do. And I can have a good advice then other people\'s advice. >>> And I might have a better advice than other people.When I follow other people\'s advice I can figure it out fastly and more good, but they can give a bad advice, and I can have a good advice. >>> If I follow other people\'s advice, I can easily figure out whether the advice is good or bad. And if it is bad, I can tell other people not to follow my decision. Sometimes, I think about it but there is no good advice, I need their advice to figure out. >>> Sometimes, I don\'t get any advice especially when I need one. I think I have to follow my advice but, when I think about it and there is no answer I will follow other people\'s advice. >>> I think I have to follow my idea but when I don\'t get a positive result, I will follow other people\'s advice. Before, I will think about when it is the good advice I will act, but when it is not a good advice I will think more or ask to another people. >>> Before acting, I will think about the situation first. Then if I think that I can handle it on my own, I will follow my ideas. Otherwise, I will listen to other people\'s advice.