today's homework.

2015-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Qeustion : What’s your most prized possession? My precious item is smart phone. it is convenient of our life. the smart phone for me I'm anywhere searching a some information. These busy days it is necessary.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Clara! Thanks for sharing your opinion about our topics. Indeed, smartphones are necessary these days. Anyway, thank you for today and see you again tomorrow. You take care! ^^ Always, Kathrine ^^   Qeustion : What’s your most prized possession?My precious item is smart phone. >> My precious item is my smart phone. it is convenient of our life. >> It is convenient in our lives. the smart phone for me I\'m anywhere searching a some information. >> I can search some information in my smartphone even if I am anywhere. These busy days it is necessary. >> It is necessary especially these busy days.

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